PageMaps sketch challenge

Here's a new challenge for me, from PageMaps.  The sketch is wonderfully detailed, and because of the tremendous prize, I'll be trying it several times.  Here's the sketch:

And here's my first attempt, following it to a "t":  I used papers from DCWV "Garden Party":

supplies: cream parchment card base, papers from DCWV Garden Party, Hero Arts stamps D2129 Vanessa Butterfly andCL497 Find Joy, Memories Artprint Brown ink, antique linen distress ink, colored pencils, pink pearls